DOUBLE DIALOGUE
Written with David's Kaz in response to a challenge. She posted the original dialogue and I culdn't resist adding the 'thinks' (in blue text)
Last night. Did I?”
(aw shit he really isn't my kind of blond)
“Did you what?”
(now what's he getting uptight about? - he snored but
the air in here is still sweet enough)
“You know?”
(I hate it when he plays little Mr. Mid-West Innocence)
“No Starsk I don’t know.”
(Spit it out and let's get breakfast.)
“Did I do anything err!”
(He's doing it to make me mad...but I'm going to stay
calm...I will stay calm...I will....)
“Oh right. You mean anything embarrassing.”
(can't believe he isn't irresistable can he)
“Yeah.”
(aw shit it sounds like I did.)
“Well that depends what you would class as embarrassing.”
(that should get him worried)
“Hutch!”
(I will keep calm...I
will)
“Relax buddy I had your back all night.”
(work that one out kiddo)
“Awe thanks buddy.”
(So much for his reputation - I must have slept right
through it)
“Anytime pal.”
(no comment)